Freedom within me
My wishful sins tremble my deeds
Care not bout me, somehow ye wreak
Flying away I still inside
Not a moment to perish neither cry
Stuck in the stillness of time
Carefree of the world, a moment withers
Ye see, hear yet disturbed
Destiny beckons understanding soothing shrieks
Drop of tears form an ocean of ambience
Smile fear not to find the light.
posted by Abs at 12:47 AM
6 Comments:
Id di comment on your blog Im not sure where did it go
12:06 PM
Or maybe not..Im bit tierd today and not gathering as it seems...Hey Im having poetry tribute pls join me in this tribute
12:07 PM
Intersting!
4:23 PM
Thanks Guys.
Nasra, sorry could not make it to the tribute.
Silent waves, thx 4 passing by.
4:39 AM
The flow sounds very natural, had any hard time writing this at all ?
4:58 PM
Ti3gib, thx 4 the comments. In actual fact it was quite easy to write that as the words just flowed through as i typed. Happens when im really in the mood to write.
For this particular one, if you read through each line carefully, u'll notice something wonderful and meaningful.
10:33 PM
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