Life Submissions.

This poem was written by me and by Frozen Echo.. He is a lovely inspiring poet. The numbers in odd are by me, and the numbers in even are written by him. Enjoy.


1. Gloomy gloom, a soft sound travels the path
2. The darkness caressed me with its silent noise
3. Stillness wrapped the hymn in its wrath
4. Anger tickles peace like a frustated toy
5.Life had showed a miserable course, dead beat
6. My tears are dust in this game of sadness
7. A blurred vision wraps itself around like a sheet
8. Blinded I try to sheath this pain through slumber but im sleepless.
9. A chilling winter cracks open my inner soul
10. The nightmare reawakens and posses me whole
11. I walk on, as strange eyes view me and scowl
12. the devil on my shouldler pricks me with curses
13.As the world spins, life slowly drips away
14. Paleness takes over me as I sigh my last breath
15. A gush of wind makes me sway
16. Speechless and unmoving I feel death
17. A tear flows through coarse creeks
18. Like dew drops in spring I feel the misery in me leak
19. I feel the pain of surrender, no more a fighter..

copyright abs,frozen echo.